martes, 1 de febrero de 2011

INTRODUCTION OF ME !!!

Hi, my name is Bea. I´m twelve years old and I live in Barcelona. I´m in first of ESO A, we are twenty seven teenage classmates.  My favorite subject is History and the worst subject for me is Mathematics, I hate it !
My hobbies are uncountable, because I have lots of sports and activities I like for example:
·         Dancing
·         Skiing                                                                          
·         Reading
·         Singing
·         Be active …
But however there are lots of things that I hate like :
·         Go cycling
·         Play golf
·         Play chess
·         People who is shy …
This is my English blog , I hope that you like !!!
SEE YOU SOOON !!! BYE

1 comentario:

  1. Hi Bea! Great introduction!

    MISTAKES:

    1) "people who is shy": Grammar mistake. Remember that "people" is plural, so the verb must be plural too-- "People who ARE shy".

    2) "I hope you like!!!!" Grammar mistake. "Like" is a transitive verb. This means that you need an object pronoun-- "I hope you like IT".

    Please, make the corrections.

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